User talk:Chelseye123

Hey Chelsey,

After peer reviewing your article I made all the changes on Emily's account since she was the one that uploaded the article into wiki. I thought overall that the article was written very nice. There were a few grammar mistakes, but it happens to the best of us. I would have however liked to see more of a contribution from your end, as the article points out you only did about 1/3rd the work as Emily. I don't know if this is true, but wikipedia shows you did more editing to her work, rather than adding information. The paragraph you added was well written though.

Hey Steven,

Thanks for your feedback. Even though Wikipedia shows that Emily contributed more than me, we wrote everything in a google docs document and then she copied and pasted it. I wrote the whole paragraph on "Political Affiliations & Behaviors," she wrote the second paragraph on "Challenges to Women in Politics" and then we each wrote about half of the "Steps Needed for Change" article. She wasn't quite done with her portion when I was so when she was done, she copied and pasted everything from Google docs. So our work was about equal. Chelseye123 (talk) 19:24, 25 April 2016 (UTC)