User talk:Cheche1993/Judith Slaying Holofernes(Artemisia Gentileschi, Naples)
Hello Channing Nicole,
I really like what you have done with this article. I will just give a few suggestions that I hope might help... Under history: I do not think you need to use the word "undoubtedly" because it seems like an opinion perhaps. Under subject matter/ biblical: I am not sure what this means; "The episode of Judith beheading Holofernes is not a book that is included in the Protestant bible."... Do you mean this occurrence in not in this book? I really love your visual analysis of this painting. I found your historiography section very interesting and full of useful and unique information. Lastly, I think your reference section is coming along nicely, you might just want to see if you can find a couple more resources.
I hope this helps! JanelleDeseree
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