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[edit]2 December 2015
[edit]- So far so good. You'll need to expand some of the sections to give the historical evidence that supports what you've stated, not just the citation. Think about what we discussed in our last meeting to offer an example of the "non statements" these men made. Also, you'll want to link your mentions of people like Philip Francis with their articles. You can do this by putting [[ ]] around the names...make sure your use of the name actually links to the article: for example, you refer to Sir Philip Francis, so you'd want to link it like this [[Philip Francis|Sir Philip Francis]] and it will look like this Sir Philip Francis in the article text. Obviously you'll leave off the nowiki command. Other text (rotten borough, etc) can also be linked.
- Your reference style needs help. <ref>"Getting the Vote." The National Archives. Government of the United Kingdom, Web. <http://www.nationalarchives.gov.uk/pathways/citizenship/struggle_democracy/getting_vote.htm>.</ref> could be more safely expressed as <ref>National Archives (UK), [http://www.nationalarchives.gov.uk/pathways/citizenship/struggle_democracy/getting_vote.htm ''The Struggle for Democracy''], Accessed 2 December 2015.</ref> Please look at the other pages there as well. Britain and the French Revolution has a couple of documents you could use, and they state quite clearly that societies such as this one were infiltrated with government spies, and their ring leaders arrested by 1793. The members had good cause to be nervous about what they said, because there were certainly spies among them! auntieruth (talk) 18:37, 2 December 2015 (UTC)