User talk:Ccoh063
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[edit]Perhaps you can add a summaries to "selected written works" and maybe include a short description of the importance of these words as a lead.
Maybe combine Education career into "early life" as the majority of that section is off-topic (discussing the politics of the time rather than Chesnutt's particular contributions. Or, add some more information about his contribution while he was a teacher.
In "Legal and writing career" consider changing "Chesnutt read the law" to "studied the law." Maybe move the "Writing" section before "Social and political activism."
Your article is already in great shape, so I think you should work on conciseness and combining the sections about his life, as its a bit redundant to have several.
Move "Legacy and honors" so that it becomes the last section in the article. Liz2077 (talk) 19:29, 29 November 2022 (UTC)
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:20, 18 October 2022 (UTC)
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[edit]It seems like your article is in pretty good shape without any edits from you, but there are certainly some improvements you could make. In general, many statements need citations. Every section is in need of citations, so I think this would be a good place to start. Any claim or specific piece of information needs to be cited from a secondary source. Also, aim for simple sentence structure and make sure everything is written in a neutral tone. I think you could also consider integrating the sections about his personal life. If you want me to go over your article once you have gone into more detail please feel free to let me know! Nxmaleck (talk) 20:12, 29 November 2022 (UTC)
Some bubble tea for you!
[edit]You're doing great! Nxmaleck (talk) 20:13, 29 November 2022 (UTC) |
A brownie for you!
[edit]Good job! Liz2077 (talk) 14:19, 1 December 2022 (UTC) |