User talk:Cbeedy

This user is a student editor in University_at_Albany/Information_Literacy_in_the_Humanities_and_Arts_(Spring_2021) .

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Hello, Cbeedy, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:09, 3 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Wci peer review

I thought that this page was a very informing page that focused on facts rather than biased opinions. I thought that the balance was great for this article. It is short and sweet and cuts right to the chase and I don't think I would change anything. I am considering maybe doing something with computer science so if I were to look up this wiki I think that this is a great page to give questioning youth a more general understanding on the history of computer science. You lead this page off very well. You have all of the important information that people want to know when they try and find the history of something. You talked about John McCarty who created the term of artificial intelligence and then you go to talk about different components of computer since which I think helps the article out alot. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sbehrent (talk • contribs) 15:20, 9 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Sbehrent,

Thank you for your feedback. This is exactly what I was trying to convey since within my article, and I have links that will direct the readers to more in-depth information about a topic or the individual themselves. I am glad to see that my article is useful to inspiring minds. It is a little worrying sometimes when you have never done article posting before to see if what you are contributing is useful for other people. Since I am an Informatics major, I was worried that this would be too technical for some people. This is also another reason why I chose to link to other wiki articles for further explanation. My goal is to expand the knowledge of the main article. The world of computer science is fascinating and ever-changing. This article will always need additional information contributed.

Thanks, --Cbeedy (talk) 15:01, 11 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, Thank you for your comments. I gained confidence about my text and now feel better about publishing it. I will work on finding a different image and on the citations. Jmm26 (talk) 21:57, 14 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]