User talk:Carolinehcollins

The article on the culture in Ancient Rome included many different areas of culture that was present in Rome, but did not have very many sources and lacked quite a few citations. The philosophy section is particularly problematic because their is a flag that no sources are cited. After reviewing the talk page for the article, so reviewers noted some stylistic issues that indicated the article was choppy and some sections provided significantly more information than other sections. For instance, the section on education lacks a lot of information and definitely could be expanded upon. In addition, the visual arts section could be expanded as well. The article definitely needs to be edited to provide additional information through reliable sources in conjunction with a tailoring of the information already provided. Carolinehcollins (talk) 04:01, 3 April 2017 (UTC)Carolinehcollins