User talk:Carlos Iraheta/sandbox

BIOL 151 Article Review

Hi Carlos,

Great article! I included some editorial and wording changes on the paper copy and below are general comments:

Be sure to include a source/citation for every fact that you write in the article. Unless it's common knowledge, it's good practice to include a source for the information. I did not see any sources on the printed copy.
Do you plan to combine your article with the existing or replace it? There are some useful sentences in the existing article as well.
Is there any ecology information - anything about deforestation or threats to the pitch pine population? Or efforts for protection?

Hoganan (talk) 01:28, 5 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Peer Review

The article was informative and neutral. I would suggest to add citations throughout your writing. In the description section, maybe separating some parts would allow the article to flow better. Zahrakordkheili (talk) 20:03, 5 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]