User talk:Carlodavid11
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 04:50, 27 September 2016 (UTC)
Potentially Expanding Introduction & Adding Helpful Links
[edit]The article begins with a simple sentence that highlights Bangladesh's tremendous role in global tea production. But the use of the word "important" sounds either arbitrary or subjective. Perhaps it would have been more helpful if there were links provided to make the case about its "172 commercial tea estates" or perhaps even a separate link that leads the reader to a page on the "world's largest working plantations." Essentially, this would provide (1) better context (2) points of comparison among tea plantations and production worldwide. The succeeding paragraph provides a brief geographical/ecological characteristic of tea production in Bangladesh but it would be more helpful to name a few states within these districts. Carlodavid11 (talk) 04:17, 1 October 2016 (UTC)