User talk:Captmondo/Archives/2009/August

Delrina FAR

I have nominated Delrina for a featured article review here. Please join the discussion on whether this article meets featured article criteria. Articles are typically reviewed for two weeks. If substantial concerns are not addressed during the review period, the article will be moved to the Featured Article Removal Candidates list for a further period, where editors may declare "Keep" or "Remove" the article's featured status. The instructions for the review process are here. —Mattisse (Talk) 13:15, 23 July 2009 (UTC)

There is no two week deadline. If work is steady it can take 3+ months YellowMonkey (cricket photo poll!) paid editing=POV 02:30, 7 August 2009 (UTC)

Glad to hear it! I am shortly about to go on vacation so wasn't planning on being able to get back to the article for a bit. Glad to hear that more time than I though is feasible. Cheers! Captmondo (talk) 14:08, 7 August 2009 (UTC)

• Just wanted to let you know that I put up a little more detailed review. I won't lie to you — I don't think the article will be turned around to FA standard in any reasonable amount of time. I hope I'm wrong. You've got a hell of a lot of work ahead of yourself, but it can be done. It's going to be a slog. Good luck. :) JKBrooks85 (talk) 05:09, 26 August 2009 (UTC)

Thanks for the extensive comments. Am fairly sure I can meet most of the other citation requirements, and will look into making sure that all like publications (i.e. magazines, books and Web links) are referenced using the same format. You are right that the trickiest thing about this will be to better document the internal workings of the company more, as per the Microsoft article. That will be the toughest nut to crack for certain, though will see what I can dig up. Cheers! Captmondo (talk) 14:23, 26 August 2009 (UTC)