User talk:Cantrell39
Migration Tracking review
[edit]Good review and I agree with the recommendations. Overall I think a little more substance could be added - ~2 sentences- the clarifications could probably do it. And, yes remember to link to other Wikipedia pages. Marciaharrison (talk) 14:48, 20 February 2017 (UTC)
Migration Tracking Page Review
[edit]Hey Jess. Here is my review for your edits to the Animal Migration tracking page. Your addition is the first time the word telemetry is used, so it would be good to define it quickly and maybe link to the wikipedia telemetry page. On a related note, the "other forms of telemetry" uses some technical terms that might be worth giving examples of real world applications and examples, maybe from the source you cited. Otherwise I think that you made a good addition to the article.
BOUDIANA (talk) 16:45, 17 February 2017 (UTC)
Thanks Diana! That's very good advice!Cantrell39 (talk) 21:58, 17 February 2017 (UTC)Jess
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