User talk:Cakers12/sandbox

This article had great reliable sources, it was also neutral and unbiased and gave a comprehensive view of gender. I loved the way it was phrased, it made it easy to understand. --Lstaben15 (talk) 21:53, 24 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Peer Review

Hello Cassandra,

These are my only two edits i would make and you can choose to change them or not.

Start this sentence with a different opening. "Which in turn leads to a difference in personality, career paths, or relationships." Which in turn doesn't roll of the tongue super easily.

And lastly, "Throughout life male and females are seen as two very different species who have very different personalities and should stay on separate paths." you didn't put an "s" after male.

Otherwise, your sources look great and you have very unbiased wording. Good job. Gfrench55clu (talk) 00:34, 26 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]