User talk:Cahlborg

I just finished reviewing you article. I think it exemplifies good flow and calirty, and is organized in an appropriate manor. I imagine it to have been difficult to build a page without an initial wikipedia page for the topic to run off of. It is lacking citations, so be sure to have all citations available for all quotes and materials used. Structure was well done for an encyclopedia and used a neutral tone. I fixed one grammatical error (switched a period to a colon). Would be cool if you found a still picture from the film to put in your article. Best of luck on the remainder of the project! Tarynbrier (talk) 23:55, 2 December 2014 (UTC)