User talk:Cagneiduncan/Surface water
Hi Cagnei, I really like your article! I think that it is a very interesting subject and I liked how you sectioned off your article. I also liked how you included a section on the future of surface water. I think that your page would be a lot stronger if you wrote a longer, more clear introduction that gives a full explanation of the subject. I think that this will help the reader understand the subject more and will help the readability of your page. I also recommend that you increase the length of the “types of surface water” and “the future of surface water” sections. Last, I would add a few more sources. Overall, I think that your page looks great! Let me know if you would like me to do a more in-depth peer review once you get a little farther along.
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