User talk:Caesarlan1992
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:10, 14 January 2019 (UTC)
Kai's peer review
[edit]First of all the Lead section should be improved to gain more attention from the public since is the first paragraph, helping to have a better flow that would improve and smooth the audience's reading. If possible, an upgraded picture would give a better look to this article.
I was looking into reference [1] and I am not sure whether this is the right article to cite this sentence "All other non-wood products derived from forest resources, comprising a broad variety of other forest products, are collectively described as non-timber forest products (NTFP).[1] ", since it does not elaborate more information from that article.
Seems that it would be necessary to elaborate more the structure of this article because there is no transition between Resource pressures and Forest product details. One suggestion may be to describe first the variety of industries that currently use forest products by adding some explanation of these industries and/or adding the link to its Wikipedia page. For example, the Pulp (paper) and paper industry, Wood industry, etc.
Darlene Echeverria 03:30, 19 February 2019 (UTC)