User talk:Burke2jf

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:03, 8 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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History: good idea - could help the article flow better. Research: would recommend taking out the cases that aren't in american football entirely, doesn't make sense to include in this page. I think adding more detail to the stories and litigations could help strengthen the page. I would remove sections about the CFL since the article relates to American football concussions. Restructuring the article could help strengthen the article and help readers find the information they're looking for. (NickGuthier (talk) 16:56, 29 October 2018 (UTC))[reply]