User talk:Bultatar
December 2021
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– AssumeGoodWraith (talk | contribs) 05:22, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
Your submission at Articles for creation: Robert L. McGinnis (December 9)
[edit]{{subst:Afc decline|full=Draft:Robert L. McGinnis|cv=no|reason=prof|details=|reason2=|details2=|comment=Well done on creating the draft. Thank you for your disclosure as a paid contribution. You clearly have experience in producing quality pages. I think this is very close to meeting the relevant requirements (including WP:GNG, WP:PROF) but there is an overall promotional tone making the article more like a hagiography than an encyclopedic entry. I feel that flavour needs to be toned down. Additionally, the draft tends to read too much like a CV, which Wikipedia is not. There is too much unsourced detail; and some of the sources are not reliable (eg [this letter by the subject to Yale Alumni Magazine). If you feel you can meet these requirements then resubmit the page and ping me and I would be happy to reassess. As I said, I do think this draft has potential so please do persevere! |sig=yes}}
Hello, Bultatar!
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Robert L. McGinnis has been accepted
[edit]Congratulations, and thank you for helping expand the scope of Wikipedia! We hope you will continue making quality contributions.
The article has been assessed as C-Class, which is recorded on its talk page. This is a great rating for a new article, and places it among the top 21% of accepted submissions — kudos to you! You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article.
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Cabrils (talk) 20:53, 28 February 2023 (UTC)