User talk:Bshoukeir24

This user is a student editor in George_Washington_University/Neural_Circuits_and_Behavior_(Fall_2019) .

This user is a student editor in George_Washington_University/AmWriting_Fall_2018_M_11_(Fall_2018) .

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Hello, Bshoukeir24, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:21, 29 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Peer Review

You all have done a great job of explaining how subthreshold membrane potential oscillations work. Consider defining subthreshold membrane potential oscillations in the first section. Also, work on editing some of the grammar and punctuation issues to make it easier for readers to understand the concepts.

• 2nd Sentence of 1st Paragraph: It should say “through the membrane” instead of “through membrane” • 3rd Sentence of 1st Paragraph: “The” instead of “he” • Last Sentence of 1st Paragraph: Put a comma before the word “resulting” • 1st Sentence of 2nd Paragraph: Put a comma after the word “threshold” • 3rd Sentence of 2nd Paragraph: “In some neurons” sounds better than “In some type of neurons” • Last Sentence of 2nd Paragraph: Use the word “They” instead of “It”

Consider expanding on how subthreshold membrane potential oscillations are implicated in layers V of the entorhinal cortex, the inferior olive in vivo, the olfactory bulb, and the dorsal cochlear nucleus. I love how you all linked some of the concepts in your article to other Wikipedia articles. Okonmahvictor (talk) 02:47, 25 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Response

As far as content goes, the content should be OK as long as you are summarizing what is stated in the source material. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 00:03, 1 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]