User talk:Brittany2442/sandbox

I move the title out of the TOC, and into the general paragraph at the start. Everything else is good.--Hagen76 (talk) 13:48, 24 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Move theory out of intro. "Were" is misspelled. Figures need higher resolution; consider .svg instead of jpg. Consider adding more detail: what are average drop sizes for emulsions in the data table? Are the interfacial energies known? What surfactants are used to stabilize those emulsions? If electrostatic stabilization is a factor, what are the surface potentials involved? Also, the data table needs refs. Hagen76 (talk) 18:20, 29 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]