User talk:Briannestarr96/sandbox

Prof Garcia's Comments

A nice job here, Brianne, but here are a few things you need to improve on ASAP: 1. Always include the FULL citation for your sources. You can't just put up the link: make sure you actually write out everything about each source. 2. You did not put your information on the right talk page. Remember that Wikipedia is case sensitive, so "Cultural Leveling" is not the same page as "Cultural leveling." Please go back and put your information in the right talk page. 3. Take a look at the book "McDonaldization of Society." That book will be VERY important for this page.

You are off to a great start! But please be more careful in the future. You must be very thorough in all the work you do here. Remember that you have an audience of 7 billion people. Alfgarciamora (talk) 13:57, 6 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Briannestarr96: I'm worried about your work, Brianne. Is everything okay? I see a lot of work on your Sandbox, but you aren't really putting it together into coherent sentences to put on your mainspace. You need to work on that ASAP. Alfgarciamora (talk) 20:36, 4 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]