User talk:Brialexengli/sandbox
Sources
[edit]Let me know when you've added the quotations that mention characters from other books. Josef Horáček (talk) 02:36, 21 February 2016 (UTC)
- is this better? Brialexengli (talk) 13:43, 23 February 2016 (UTC)
- Yes, thank you. Josef Horáček (talk) 03:31, 24 February 2016 (UTC)
- How about my lead? Brialexengli (talk) 03:48, 24 February 2016 (UTC)
- Yes, thank you. Josef Horáček (talk) 03:31, 24 February 2016 (UTC)
The Lead
[edit]Your lead is a good start. Here are some suggestions. 1. What is Colby? You should say something like, "The protagonist, Emaline, is a native of Colby, a small seaside town." 2. Spell out "eleventh." "Young adult" is lower-case.
Revise it and post it in the article. Josef Horáček (talk) 10:47, 26 February 2016 (UTC)
- ok i edited it. Brialexengli (talk) 18:03, 26 February 2016 (UTC)