User talk:Brezhurley/sandbox

Please paste all text into Word and check for repeated words and misspelling. Check that meaning is always clear; for instance, "The force per unit area is approximately ...". What is the area referred to? Don't repeat yourself from section to section. Reorganize theory section so that subsections are arranged in some fashion: general theory to specific cases, simple theories to more complex, or something like that. I found going from one theory to another confusing. Explain whether or not they conflict and how they are different. The figure is good. You need two more and a data table. I suggest common flocculants, their chemical struncture/sequence, their application, and their physical properties such as radius. Hagen76 (talk) 15:04, 2 June 2013 (UTC)