User talk:Brendacastrejon/sandbox
TA Comments:
In-text citations: yes
Professional tone: The beginning of this section reads like an obituary rather than a professional article. Sentences like “He died during a peaceful sleep” and “Although he is no longer alive, his legacy still lives on” should be revised to reflect a more biographical tone.
Paraphrasing real science: yes
Grammar and spelling: overall good
Links to other wiki articles: none
Score: 17/20
Peer Review:
CHATTERJEE, KUSHAL Peer Review: 0/20
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