User talk:Boeckmana1/Hertha von Dechend

It's important that the lead paragraph make clear why the person is significant. What makes von Deschend worthy of a Wikipedia entry? (A single sentence on significance would be adequate.)

Given the significance of Hamlet's Mill, a summary of the book's main arguments and the ways in which has been influential should be included here. A critical review would also include comments on the book's reception and discussion of some of the significant criticisms of it. This information should come from independent reviews of the book, which should be cited in the bibliography.

You have done a nice job of including some basic information, but this entry should have gone farther to discuss why she is an important figure.

Note that I have added a number of hyperlinks, tightened ambivalent language, and eliminated some repetitions and redundancies.

Please clean up the references and bibliographic entries to conform to a standard Wikipedia style. Hoopes (talk) 03:45, 3 December 2012 (UTC)