User talk:Blazingstar24
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[edit]Hello, Blazingstar24, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:55, 13 March 2019 (UTC)
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[edit]Hi! I have some notes:
This needs more reliable sources to back up claims and establish notability. The article uses self-published sources such as Wordpress blogs and websites that either doesn't have their editorial and verification processes posted or they don't have it posted very clearly. These aren't the best sources to use in an article, as many would not see them as reliable sources on Wikipedia. The only time we can really use self-published sources is when they're routinely seen as a reliable source by other reliable sources, such as academic and scholarly sources. Things like this are stronger sources. I'd definitely utilize your school's database to find sourcing.
As the pop culture section is sourced by a blog, I'm not sure that this would really fit here. If you can find mentions in things like this and this then you can list them - although it may be good to have some coverage of the use of the heroine's journey in pop culture.
Make sure that you're only summarizing what is in the source material - we cannot create our own theories and conclusions.
I hope that this helps! Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:48, 6 May 2019 (UTC)
A page you started (Heroine's journey) has been reviewed!
[edit]Thanks for creating Heroine's journey.
User:Doomsdayer520 while reveiwing this page as a part of our page curation process had the following comments:
Thank you for your new article on the Heroine's journey, but note that I and some other editors have some concerns about how the article is presented. In particular, see Wikipedia's rule on original research, which may be an issue with the way you have synthesized the theories of Murdock and Schmidt. In any case, follow the links in the notice at the top of the article.
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