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Haruka's peer review
[edit]I think you have a great roadmap for this article. I think once you fill out your section with information and sources that this will be a full and comprehensive article on the Presidency of Burundi. I am especially a fan of how you have separated the powers and duties of the presidency into separate subsections. With this article, you are not only talking about the presidency, but also the constitution, the government, different historical developments, etc. It is a lot to tackle but I think you are doing an excellent job at it.
Daniel Garcia's Peer Review
[edit]Hello Kazimira,
After reviewing your article, I have to start mentioning that I really admire the ambition of such a long project and that you are doing an amazing job. There were some parts of your work that caught my attention. First, the structure of the article is really comprehensive. I liked the way you developed the subsections and the notes that you have to possibly add more content. I also really liked the graphics and pictures that you are including. After looking at the way you added graphs, I am more inclined to add some on my article. Finally, I really liked how your content is concise and straight to the point.
One aspect of the article that confused me a little bit was you mentioning the 1974 and the 2005 constitution under the different categories because it is not clear to me what is the purpose. In the legal field, the latter is supposed to precede and be the functioning legal guide. Are you mentioning both constitutions for historical purposes or comparative purposes about the powers that each constitution gave the president? I think that you could clarify that more explicitly or maybe create a section under for history? Finally, while I really like the way you are concise with your content, just be careful with the content that is not included and that could be important for the overall understanding of the article. Overall, you have done an incredible job.
I look forward to reading your final version of the article.