User talk:Biologist122/sandbox
Peer Review
[edit]Major points: Make sure you avoid your content sounding like an advertisement or endorsement of the companies that have produced the therapies. With the edits to History edits, try to flesh out the "early trials in the '40s and '50s" line. Also, the entire "Viral Gene Therapy" theory section has no citations, so you could add some, since that's your area that you've researched. Add citations to other sections as needed.
Move the History section to be the first body section. For the Oncolytic Virotherapy section, move some of the first two paragraphs to the History section and most of the third paragraph to the products section.
Minor edits:
- If there is a place where they would be helpful, add visuals, especially of a virus and of how they integrate viral DNA into eukaryotic cells
- link terms throughout the article
- If concerns come up in the talk page, double check that the other products sections aren't biased
Canipleasegetausername (talk) 18:22, 18 November 2019 (UTC)Canipleasegetausername