User talk:Billyboffman/sandbox

Jenelle -Early Life Little else is known about their first son. Their second son was baptised on 14 February 1655/6 and also named Bartholomew. Their third son Charles was born in 1660. : is there more to be said about the children? Do they become artist/do they give her artistic vision? -Throughout the page, double check on some spelling that includes the U like favours and such but, overall good. -For the style it is talked about in the Criticism however, the style is empty but, overall concise and clear [[[User:Xjenxranx|Xjenxranx]] (talk) 17:26, 6 March 2020 (UTC)Xjenxranx]

Jelaine - Intro - Mary Beale (née Cradock; late March 1633 – 8 October 1699) was one of the most successful professional female Baroque-era portrait painters of the late 17th century due to her perseverance of her business. Praised by Richard Gibson and court painter Peter Lely, she is considered as successful as Joan Carlile.[citation needed] Mary Beale managed to be the financial provider for her family through her professional portrait business.: Even though you will expand in the Professional Life section, you can say a significant detail about her portrait business and tie it in with being the breadwinner since those are two important ideas in the heading. I would also put the "Mary Beale managed to be..." sentence after the first sentence. Overall great.

[[[User:OceanBlue11|OceanBlue11]] (talk) 17:36, 6 March 2020 (UTC)OceanBlue11]