User talk:Bicyclepedia
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 15:35, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
Emma Gendron
[edit]Ready for mainspace!
- Great job! Well-researched, good structure, lots of content. Nice infobox, too!
- I recommend moving this sentence out of the lead section: "In the early years of Francophone cinema in Canada, films were primarily focused on non-fiction topics; filmmakers produced newsreels, actualities, and travelogues."
- I also recommend moving the discussion of the films to a section called "Films" and then turning the Filmography into a bulleted list or table.