User talk:Bhatsls
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You’re making great process in the sandbox! The background section is looking great—I particularly appreciate your neutral tone. Keep up the good work on summarizing the case. I would also suggest reviewing some of the secondary literature and providing some key takeaways and further readings. Slsnw12 (talk) 19:49, 25 February 2019 (UTC)
This is really great! I’m very impressed. I would start the decision section with a little more on what the Fourth Circuit’s decisions are, keeping in mind that Wikipedia readers may skip down to a section they think is relevant without reading the whole page. I found the last sentence of your dissent section somewhat confusing, but that may be because you’re still planning to explain it a little more and haven’t gotten to it yet. You should also look out for quote marks as your proofread, especially for quotes within a quote. Srsaff (talk) 20:03, 26 February 2019 (UTC)
Welcome!
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:12, 24 January 2019 (UTC)
Sandbox
[edit]Hi! Your sandbox draft looks great so far - I think it's ready to move live whenever you're ready. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:29, 28 February 2019 (UTC)
A kitten for you!
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Apparently I can send you a kitten
Srsaff (talk) 01:30, 9 March 2019 (UTC)
Your draft article, Draft:Hudson v. Palmer
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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia! Lapablo (talk) 23:19, 14 August 2019 (UTC)