User talk:Berrypuinitan/sandbox/St. Francis in Ecstasy (Bellini)
Hi Berry,
So I'm just going to take some notes and then summarize at the end. Moving through the article, your beginning description is good, but I think some textual citations are needed. Some of the information listed was repetitive and simplified, such as the tidbit about the painting being in the Frick Collection. Also, I think you could formalizing a bit more, such as "former living room" instead of "what used to be the living room." Your article looks a little bit sparse, but I expect you to research and add more information soon. I think you should probably add a "description" header to describe the painting itself. A "history" header could also help you out too with going into the context of the subject matter and the history behind the oil paint and pigments used. Overall, I think more information is needed, along with more sources and in-text citations. I like the fact that you have many different pictures, and that definitely helps with visualization. Overall, good progress, but more information is needed.
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