User talk:Benjamin max

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Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! ^Wylie_Coyote 18:48, 8 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

KC Cole

Hi CAWylie, thank you for your feedback. I have gone ahead and added more than half a dozen references for the KC Cole article and removed the long list of external links. I believe that the article is ready to be approved. Please advise. best, Benjamin.

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I'm sorry, but I'm afraid KC Cole is not a notable person. JHUbal27 ^{Roar! :-)} 03:00, 24 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I completely disagree with you. KC Cole is among the most well-respected science journalists of her time, has authored more than half a dozen books and taken home many prestigious awards. Benjamin max (talk) 00:04, 29 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

KC Cole

Hi....I got some things you can work on now, and I'll look again later. Once we get thru the copyediting, I will approve it for you.

The Wikilink Port Washington leads to dab page. Needs to point to a specific Port Washington, and show the state.
References all go after the punctuation mark.
The first sentence is a run-on. Make 3 sentences out of it, breaking after Cleveland and again after her major.
Actually, you have a lot of run-ons. I'll help you clean them up later.

I got a little boy that needs me. More later. Happy editing! Gtwfan52 (talk) 18:46, 27 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

HI there and thank you for your attention! I shall go ahead and address these concerns. They will be ready by the time you check back. Thanks again Benjamin max (talk) 00:02, 29 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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Ocaasi^{t | c} 00:35, 29 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, thanks for the praise! That is very nice of you. Hoping to get the article approved, continue to comply with Wikipedia's standards, and contribute what I can. Benjamin max (talk) 01:21, 29 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation

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