User talk:Benjamin Charles Baird/Off-speed pitch

Hey! Just gave you some feedback on your draft here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Benjamin_Charles_Baird/Off-speed_pitch/Kathylamb7_Peer_Review It was overall well-written and I'm excited to see how you add to it! Kathylamb7 (talk) 05:20, 23 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

It was good to read overall. I think defiantly adding a visual element that shows the different trajectories of the off-speed pitches would help readers to understand the content. Perhaps adding details of how the movement of the off-speed pitches tricking hitters would be an idea that can be added to the article.Hmk0110 (talk) 15:41, 23 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]