User talk:Benedics14/sandbox

From Prof Mc: I'm impressed by the amount of material you've been able to add to the entry, and have just a few suggestions for how to polish up what's here:

Not sure about the section at the top--unfortunately it won't be possible to add images from Artstor, they are copyright protected. We emailed about this already, so I'm guessing you posted this before you got my reply. If not, probably makes sense to go back and look at the email and change the draft to use the images mentioned.
One challenge in expanding an existing entry is being on the lookout for discrepancies, so you'll want to look carefully for instances such as the one where successive sentences claim there are four churches and then that there are two churches
the entry needs more extensive linking to other Wikipedia entries, just a few of the new links would include: Holy Trinity (and other religious terms), and proper names such as John Chrys. and Dumbarton Oaks.
clean up the mechanical errors, such as the capital given to Dedicated, spelling errors (chlamys), the extra s in "in respects"
some of the wording could be streamlined so that the "north wall lacks many remains of wall ptg"
your research looks terrific, and you do a good job of citing sources

Overall though you've organized your material in a clear and logical way and the above changes shouldn't take that long to tackle. AMcClanan (talk) 16:13, 25 November 2017 (UTC)AMcClanan[reply]