User talk:Becca roo32

This user is a student editor in University_of_Cincinnati/ENGL_1001-15_English_Composition_(Spring_2019) .

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Possible article topics: Ruth Becker, Gertrude Baines, and Violet Jessop Becca roo32 (talk) 17:28, 1 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Add hyperlinks and check general grammar. I feel like the early life part belongs only in the "Aboard" section and early life should go into more detail about her life well before the Titanic. Seanp7477 (talk) 16:38, 11 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Sean's peer review to Rebecca

Add hyperlinks and check general grammar. I feel like the early life part belongs only in the "Aboard" section and early life should go into more detail about her life well before the Titanic. When writing the article, focus most of your energy on the "Aboard" section as that is what she is most notable for. A good start and I like the structure of the intro, appears to be very professional. Good information in the "Aboard" section. Seanp7477 (talk) 16:47, 11 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

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During Ruth's early life you mention her family. While the article is about her the mention of her Father could be worth expanding on due to the statement of "planned to join them in Michigan at a later date." This sentence implies that her father never makes it to America and could have a greater impact on her life later.Thomp3aj (talk) 16:51, 11 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

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Ruth Becker

Hi, the article on Ruth Becker was deleted after a community discussion (Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Ruth Becker). Pleqse do not recreate it unless you have new sigificant, in-depth sources discussing this person. Your recreation did not have such sources, so it has been deleted under speedy deletion criterium WP:CSD#G4. I hope you don't let yourself be discouraged by this, creating ne articles is one of the more difficult things here on WP. --Randykitty (talk) 22:42, 16 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]