User talk:Be1con

January 2016

Hello, I'm ScrapIronIV. I wanted to let you know that I undid one or more of your recent contributions to Fitbit because they appeared to be promotional. Advertising and using Wikipedia as a "soapbox" are against Wikipedia policy and not permitted. Take a look at the welcome page to learn more about Wikipedia. Thank you. Scr★pIron^IV 16:57, 5 January 2016 (UTC) Be1con (talk) 17:07, 5 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

January 2016

Okay, I'll fix that. Thanks for your caution and please accept my apology.

No need for an apology, it looks like it could be a valuable addition to the article. it's just a question of where we get the information from. When it's a press release, it looks like the article is supporting sales of products. An independent third-party source would help clear that up. Scr★pIron^IV 17:12, 5 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Okay, this article from The Verge is good enough? And I made some modification before it'll be submitted.

Fitbit Blaze
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During CES 2016 event,^[1] Fitbit announced the new fitness watch that called "Fitbit Blaze". Like a modern smart-watch (such as Apple Watch, Pebble Smart-watch, Android Wear watches). The Blaze focused on fitness than smart feature inside the watch. Unlike the Surge, the Blaze came with colored touchscreen, and exchangeable strap and frame with the some functionally from the Surge like auto-tracking exercise and heart-rate monitor, but lack of built-in GPS.

Be1con (talk) 17:18, 5 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Much better, but a bit of a tweak in the second sentence, perhaps? Seems a bit run-n. Maybe:

Unlike the Surge, the Blaze comes with a colored touchscreen, and exchangeable strap and frame. Some functionality from the Surge has been retained, like auto-tracking exercise and heart-rate monitor, but the Blaze lacks built-in GPS.

What do you think? Scr★pIron^IV 17:24, 5 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Absolutely better than the my current one. Thanks for your helps! Greetings from Thailand.Be1con (talk) 17:28, 5 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

May 2020

Hello, I'm Magnolia677. I noticed that you added or changed content in an article, Skrillex discography, but you didn't provide a reliable source. It's been removed and archived in the page history for now, but if you'd like to include a citation and re-add it, please do so. You can have a look at the tutorial on citing sources. If you think I made a mistake, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thank you. Magnolia677 (talk) 14:36, 31 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hello,

I will add the citation, which is the same as in the album's page, within 30 minutes.

Thanks for contacting me. Be1con (talk) 14:41, 31 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

^ "Fitbit Blaze from The Verge". The Verge.

[1] "Fitbit Blaze from The Verge". The Verge.

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