User talk:Bdbrooks
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[edit]Hello, Bdbrooks, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:31, 23 January 2018 (UTC)
Ben Brooks Peer Review
[edit]According to our training, the best Wikipedia articles have five elements: a lead section that is easy to understand, a clear structure, balanced coverage, neutral content, and reliable sources. I like where your article is headed, however it is in definite need of the five elements stated above. Also, for some reference, take a look at other wikipedia articles that have been written on TV shows. They include sections such as: Production, Crew, Casting, Characters, Development and Writing, and Filming. Possibly, a season synopsis could be engaging and worthwhile to include in your article.
The first sentence is redundant. The amount of citations is good. The language is impartial and unbiased, you are stating facts which is very good! The statistics diagram that you added is very useful and makes for a good addition to the page. I think your article could be organized more clearly. There seems to be no structure. Maybe have the Countries and their aid towards Haiti one after the other and then possibly the "UN Aid" last, along with the "US economic and development assistance"; even though the article isn't extensive, it will provide a clearer narrative for your article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Coreygor (talk • contribs) 20:35, 23 March 2018 (UTC)
April 2018
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Please do not remove maintenance templates from pages on Wikipedia, as you did to Foreign aid to Haiti, without resolving the problem that the template refers to, or giving a valid reason for the removal in the edit summary. Your removal of this template does not appear constructive, and has been reverted. Thank you. Melcous (talk) 04:13, 23 April 2018 (UTC)