User talk:Bayjanae/Ernestine Hayes
I am excited to see what you add to her life story. The current article treats her more like an academic, whose destiny was formal education. Seems to me that her education in life was broad and integrates diverse world views. I look forward to seeing how you shape the narrative to help create more of a "whole person" identity. Revisit the Amber Fullmer interview and think about the way she introduced herself. That's more of an indigenous way of self-introduction, as a whole person, and it identifies deeply to ancestral heritage and family. The current article feels much more western, identifying more with institutional credentials.
Book Review section
[edit]Consider deleting the book review section and simply integrating summary content into the section under each book. That way you can cite multiple sources or reviews when sharing information about each book. I don't think it warrants a separate section.
Infobox and lead
[edit]The lead section could possibly use some work, but having an infobox might also help. — Preceding unsigned comment added by JECason (talk • contribs) 01:33, 14 April 2021 (UTC)