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Your submission at Articles for creation: Rami Kadi (July 2)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Hoary were:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Let's just look at the opening paragraph: Kadi launched his first atelier and showroom in Beirut, Lebanon, at the age of 25, in May 2011, to showcase his hand-made designs and unique couture creations. If "couture creations" are clothes, say "clothes"; if they're something else, say what they are. How are they more unique than any other designer's? For over a decade, Kadi has been exhibiting his technology-infused works at Paris’ official fashion week shows, garnering attention from international clientele. Regardless of who's showing, don't these events routinely garner at least some attention from at least some people who've flown in from abroad? If the attention was special, say what it was. And of course all of this has to be verifiable via reliable sources, not the man's own website. ¶ Unfortunately the draft, in its current state, doesn't improve once past that first paragraph.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Hoary (talk) 21:48, 2 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Barbagency! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Hoary (talk) 21:48, 2 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Rami Kadi has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Rami Kadi. Thanks! Hoary (talk) 21:55, 25 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Rami Kadi (October 23)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by S0091 was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Need to summarize only what secondary reliable sources have independently stated and his Vogue profile is not a reliable source. Also, be mindful of WP:CITEBOMB.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Rami Kadi and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

S0091 (talk) 17:29, 23 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Concern regarding Draft:Rami Kadi

Hello, Barbagency. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Rami Kadi, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again or request that it be moved to your userspace.

If the page has already been deleted, you can request it be undeleted so you can continue working on it.

Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 18:02, 25 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Rami Kadi

Hello, Barbagency. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Rami Kadi".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. When you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz ^{Read! Talk!} 17:29, 23 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]