User talk:Balsamo Giulio

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Help request

Just so i can understand the mistakes i could make in the future, apart from me being too personal on the text, ( to which i really ain't apart of ), even though i now realize that a lot of stuff is written in first person not in a way of feeling like i made a school presentation, was there anything else wrong in the page i tried to make? I know that some of the content was super confusing and is written very poorly but other than that, i felt like it was a good and informative page, with some confusing sections and improper writing. I put in the necessary information, i used the right sources, i explained stuff nicely, the page looked good, all seemed fine to me. Though to be sure, i shall ask what other mistakes there were inside it. Balsamo Giulio (talk) 16:06, 2 April 2024 (UTC)

There is no evidence left for the edits you made, so there's nothing specific for a helper to comment on. You seem to have a catalog of things you may have done wrong, and, yes, those are to be avoided.

Going forward, here is some generic advice: spend considerable time making small improvements to existing articles. That way, you should only be able to make one type of mistake at a time and - through interaction with other editors - come to a better understanding of how Wikipedia works and how you can contribute. Learning how to identify and qualify sources, mastering the concept of notability as it is used on Wikipedia, and developing the ability to write with a neutral tone are all things to work on. Many editors here are willing to help you. — jmcgnh^{(talk) (contribs)} 17:39, 2 April 2024 (UTC)

Thanks, i guess i could use some practice from other articles, though i kind of wanna try and re-write that draft again as i have figured out in my head on how to write better, ( just so i can get that thought out of my head and start working on other pages ). However, since i don't think you'd like that i try to immediately re-write the same article again, i'll try and be patient and write some other stuff before i try that article again. Though don't be surprised if i immediately try to write it again, i have it in my head banging for a while now and it gets me motivated to write that again! Balsamo Giulio (talk) 15:31, 7 April 2024 (UTC)