User talk:BMRoberts

Hiya, BMRoberts!

Howdy, BMRoberts. I'm Theo, your Online Ambassador for the New Media Technology and Communication online Wikipedia course, and I'll be here to help if you run into any problems. I've left a welcome message here that has some useful info, including my email address. Give it a look, and let me know if you need anything! —Theopolisme (talk) 12:18, 5 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Feedback on your work

Some good development of the original stub.

Consider fixing the following:

These sections contain no content: New Media Technology, Entertainment Media, The Era of Media and Technology.
Children's Cultural studies section is not formatted per Wikipedia guidelines. Review training video to fix this.
Change to "Deborah Roedder John looks at 25 years of research"
Change to "which describes developmental stages that are mastered as children obtain the ability to cognitively interpret mediated messages"
Change to "John references Robert L. Selmen, a Professor of Education"
"impression formation(Barenboim, 1981);" is not acceptable
Change to "relating to children’s media literacy"

Mgantony (talk) 17:00, 4 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Another tip: Wikipedia articles are generally written in past tense (in your case, when referring to studies that took place in the past); you might want to double-check that. I've made a few minor copyedits; watch your sentence structure and variation. While this isn't English class, clear and coherent prose is still very much desired. :) I will be happy to take a look again whenever you'd like; just give the word! —Theopolisme (talk) 21:55, 5 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Feedback

Insufficient development and additions since the last assessment. This needs to be fixed by 5 pm on 18 Mar.Mgantony (talk) 14:39, 17 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Talkback: you've got messages!

Hello, BMRoberts. You have new messages at Theopolisme's talk page.
Message added by Theopolisme at 21:03, 22 March 2013 (UTC). You can remove this notice at any time by removing the {{Talkback}} or {{Tb}} template.[reply]

Talkback

Hello, BMRoberts. You have new messages at Daniel Simanek's talk page.
Message added 04:36, 25 March 2013 (UTC). You can remove this notice at any time by removing the {{Talkback}} or {{Tb}} template.[reply]

Daniel Simanek ^{(talk • contribs)} 04:36, 25 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Good job!

Excellent work on the original stub. The new article looks great! Mgantony (talk) 23:23, 25 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

A barnstar for you!

	The Barnstar of Diligence
	Excellent work on your class project! Mgantony (talk) 23:34, 25 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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