User talk:BBurns08/sandbox

Very Impressive I am sure your finished product will be very good. Jjdick3978 —Preceding undated comment added 19:45, 21 February 2011 (UTC).[reply]

Great start! Jessben12 (talk)

CSkibba07 Looks good, just a few minor spelling errors and such

Good start to your literature review Kdrost09 (talk) 21:47, 14 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

It looks like you have a strong start. My sense from reading this introduction is that you plan to, in essence, look for patterns in the literature regarding your topic? That's an interesting way to go about your research, and I look forward to your results! Cbrignull07 (talk)

Looks awesome! AHughes08 (talk) 22:33, 14 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I like how you have an introduction for your literature review. It gives it a purpose and lets readers know what your topic is and why it is significant. This is useful because our topic introduction section of our papers are not included in this assignment. There are just a couple minor mechanical errors that I'm sure you will find when you develop your page further. Good luck! Swpols410 (talk) 19:28, 19 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Great start! I had to read a book for a business class last semester that was all about Neoliberalism. I still have it, and if you would like to read it for another source, just let me know! Cstene07 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Cstene07 (talk • contribs) 08:00, 21 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

This sounds like a fascinating topic. It sounds like you have a good grasp on what you want to do and are heading in the right direction. I am interested to hear your results. Trens07 —Preceding undated comment added 18:39, 21 February 2011 (UTC).[reply]

An interesting approach on a difficult topic. I wonder if you will run in to a similar fate that I had and find it difficult to find existing literature/research on the topic, but that may not be the case. Jlinehan07 (talk) 19:49, 21 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Hey! Looks great, and your citations are all excellent. It appears you've got more than a great start on the lit review, and on the research! Wjansen08 (talk) 20:10, 21 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Looking at some other feedback it appears you are conducting a content analysis for your research project. One suggestion is to start siting your sources throughout your review of lit. What is your research question? Consider what you would title this review of literature if it were to stand alone from the research project. Erhall (talk) 04:30, 28 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nationalism Erhall (talk) 05:09, 28 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]