User talk:Awisbar/sandbox

Copyedit an Article

Your edits didn't improve the article. In fact, you may have changed or confused the intended meaning of the sentences. If you wish to revise the assignment, you have two days to do so. Josef Horáček (talk) 23:01, 13 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Your second round of edits is much better. Josef Horáček (talk) 19:47, 27 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Adding Sources

Your sources look good. Go ahead and add the citations to the article. Josef Horáček (talk) 23:01, 13 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Good job. Josef Horáček (talk) 19:50, 27 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

The Lead

Good lead. Add it to the article. Josef Horáček (talk) 08:05, 23 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I see two problems: 1. The name of the tournament is Rugby League Four Nations. So that's what your first sentence should start with, in bold letters. 2. You added the reference in the wrong place. It should be at the end of the sentence or section it supports.

Make these revisions by Mar. 3. Josef Horáček (talk) 19:55, 27 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]