User talk:Avvaik92

This user is a student editor in Simon_Fraser_University/Technology_and_the_Evolving_Forms_of_Publishing_(Winter_2019) .

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 15:42, 28 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Peer Review for Avvai

Hi Avvai! This was a really fascinating read and a good addition to the wikipedia page on woodcuts. I only have a couple of comments.

Perhaps consider getting rid of the adjective "famous" before Fernando Leal, just for the sake of keeping your neutral tone consistent.

You might also consider having a source for the section in which you talk about illiteracy rates pre- and post-Revolution, just in case someone is interested and to back up your statement.

I do agree with Jaz about adding some subheadings to differentiate the modern from the historical just to make things a bit clearer inside the section. RaeCorrigan23 (talk) 00:51, 5 April 2019 (UTC)RaeCorrigan23[reply]