User talk:Asledge19/sandbox
Hi team,
It looks like you've done some good research, but the article is a bit of a mess as it is right now, and I'm not quite sure what sort of feedback I can give that would be helpful.
I'd suggest finding a good Wikipedia article about a similar topic, and use that as a template for organizing and writing your article.
Let me know if you have questions - I'd be happy to take a look at the article again once you've organized it a little more.