User talk:Ashleydiggs
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:26, 1 October 2019 (UTC)
Ashley, Do you have a title? I could just not be seeing it but just double check. The first sentence is direct and useful. I know who the subject is as well as what she did to be a so important that she needs a Wikipedia page. Your lead section is very clear and gives me more information that is not too detailed about Linda Matar. The only thing I would change, would be the sentence that says “this was the same year Lebanese women were also granted the right to vote.” This sentence seems like it is just placed in the summary. Although it may relate to Ms. Matar, I do not know how it does, so maybe explain it a little more. The writing is professional and easy to understand for many different ranges of readers. The article is nonbiased and strictly factual. The formatting is consistent throughout and I found no grammar errors. There are no pictures, however, I do not know if they are available or not. Ashley credits all for her work throughout the article. I do not see any links between Wikipedia articles, so maybe work on that. Other than that you are in very good shape! Kmechley2 (talk) 17:10, 22 October 2019 (UTC)