User talk:AshleyMichelleThompson/sandbox

Nice work so far! 4.24

I will comment more later tonight, but I see a good, solid beginning here. This looks like an article! At this point, the title feels too specific given the general discussion of childhood and youth. How can you integrate the new material into the article so it seems to fit under one title?

I see good work on the citations and the quality of sources. What materials do you feel are still missing? More soon! Prof.Vandegrift (talk) 22:26, 24 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Ashley,

I'm confused - did you write the article at the top and then are also adding information about the genocide? Or are you just adding information about the genocide? I am going to go ahead and edit the whole thing and send it to you in a Word doc, but wanted some clarification so I know what the deal is. Will send you edits/suggestions later tonight! Court caitlin (talk) 15:20, 30 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

women and men in families stats

link to UN data Prof.Vandegrift (talk) 15:13, 2 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]