User talk:Arojas251
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Speedy deletion nomination of Pearl C. Hsiung
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Pearl C. Hsiung moved to draftspace
[edit]An article you recently created, Pearl C. Hsiung, is not suitable as written to remain published. It needs more citations from reliable, independent sources. (?) Information that can't be referenced should be removed (verifiability is of central importance on Wikipedia). I've moved your draft to draftspace (with a prefix of "Draft:" before the article title) where you can incubate the article with minimal disruption. When you feel the article meets Wikipedia's general notability guideline and thus is ready for mainspace, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page. ... discospinster talk 00:10, 18 March 2021 (UTC)
Peer review for Pearl C. Hsuing
[edit]Under “Biography “:
- First sentence: after “1973” add “and” then remove “living and” to make a compound sentence.
- Third sentence: change “art work” to “artwork” and add a comma after that word
- Last sentence: add a linked article to the word “surrealism”
- also the last sentence would actually go better under “Style & Artwork”
Under “Education”:
- 2nd sentence: remove the word “it”, looks accidentally placed
- 3rd sentence : there is an extra “in” that needs to be removed
- No cite on last sentence, if same as previous either add it or move the cite to the very last sentence so we know that it and the previous sentence share the same cite.
Under “Style & Artwork”:
- 3rd sentence: replace “(she)” with “(who)” it just sounds better and more consistent
- 4th: put comma after “up-bringing” for a better structured sentence
- Maybe link a photo to her painting “Power Chode Homina”
- Maybe link a definition to “fetid” since it’s not a common word
Under “Honors and Awards”
- remove random spacing
- no period or cite on last sentence
Under “Solo Exhibitions”
- very well done
- just a suggestion: link the exhibit to the title instead of putting the whole URL to the right but other than that I thought it was good
Overall:
- there were zero links you should have links everywhere
- was consistent and neutral
- putting “Solo Exhibitions” before “ Honors and Awards” would make it for a better read since there are no actual sentences when you write about her awards.
- you mentioned a lot of important stuff which is good but maybe add to those paragraphs to make them fuller if you can. Sarai1021 (talk) 03:53, 5 April 2021 (UTC)
Concern regarding Draft:Pearl C. Hsiung
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