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Breanna's Peer Review

This is well written, and very clear and concise. Good job! Your coverage is neutral and broad, a good first draft. Just a couple of notes-

You need to cite where all of your information came from. If you got a sentence or a paragraph from a certain source, you need to put a citation at the end of the sentence or paragraph that contains the information from that source.

Beneath the header "National Legislation" -You may want to edit the first sentence ("Congress passed the Comstock Act was passed)

Last paragraph under "National Legislation" -In the first sentence, you say "has stood sense," you may want to use "since" instead of "sense"

Last paragraph under "Pennsylvania Legislation" -Governor Wolf's last name actually has no 'e'

First paragraph under "Notable Court Cases" -After Thornburgh, you may want to use "citing" instead of "siting"

Just in general, maybe run your content through spell check.

Just a couple of suggestions and notes, but good job!