User talk:Arista.w/sandbox
Arista.w, I reviewed the Beatboxing article you assigned yourself. It was informative but very vague in parts. The summary was short and to the point, but did not encompass all of the content portions in the article. This was a problem I saw quite a bit throughout the article. The prehistory is where I would expect to see more about how it came to be and the dynamics of beatboxings creation and adaptation throughout the years. Focusing on the history of its origination would be an interesting addition to the article. Also, in the notation section I would suggest expanding on the standard beatbox notation as an alternative to IPA. You would be able to apply much of what we have learned in this class so far, and add unique and useful information. Jem8953
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