User talk:Apelle1

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Hello, Apelle1, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 13:30, 17 October 2017 (UTC)

Hand, Foot, and Mouth Disease Peer Review

Really great start! I like that there is a good international representation in your information. The only suggestions I have are to take another look at your grammar; it's a little comma heavy in some places. Also, it's hard to tell if the disease incidence has changed over time or not with the information presented. Having that stated clearly could be helpful. Additionally, seeing the age distribution for the disease might be a helpful aid to your other statistical information. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Hygieia.viden (talk • contribs) 04:25, 20 November 2017 (UTC)